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Foley is it possible that the lad Matrim is speaking to in the stables is Javan, if you see any problems with how the lad is portrayed in comparision to Javan I am happy to amend.
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Nerindel, I only briefly, briefly glanced through the post when you first posted it. I was figuring it was Javan who Matrim was talking to - he's the only otherr person who'd be in the stables with horses at the moment, likely.
I'll read it through for real this time and I'll tell you if he's in character or not.
EDIT: It looks fine. I'll go ahead and post in answer.
-- Folwren