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JennyHallu · 10-08-2006, 07:03 PM

yes, tara, that's exactly where I mean.

lmp, i worry that the chronology there may be too strict, too pat. I think part of this scenario we're building requires a strong element of chaos, of lots of things happening at once and a great deal of confusion. I think we need to be careful about putting any strict order on what needs to happen next.

This is not to say that all those things don't need to happen, although I don't remember Tara's response to Ang's mutual death-age offer, but more that I think it should be a bulletted list, rather than numbered. Except that Lin and Scyld need to get their patooties bookin' it on out of there.

10-08-2006, 07:03 PM	#399
JennyHallu The Pearl, The Lily Maid Join Date: Jan 2006 Location: In my luxury Barrow, snuggled up in a pile of satin pillows, eating fresh fruit. Posts: 1,628	yes, tara, that's exactly where I mean. lmp, i worry that the chronology there may be too strict, too pat. I think part of this scenario we're building requires a strong element of chaos, of lots of things happening at once and a great deal of confusion. I think we need to be careful about putting any strict order on what needs to happen next. This is not to say that all those things don't need to happen, although I don't remember Tara's response to Ang's mutual death-age offer, but more that I think it should be a bulletted list, rather than numbered. Except that Lin and Scyld need to get their patooties bookin' it on out of there. __________________ <=== Lookee, lookee, lots of IM handles!