Ok, Manan and Lyra, I like the kidnapping scene, just discuss with Aylwen what you would like to happen [img]smilies/smile.gif[/img]
Aylwen and Maika: Ive gone to find Cartil. Let me know what you think Gita will do. Run, or fight and blow her disguise???
I tried to portray Laurel as a kind of wild and undisciplined fighter, with a strange kind of bloodlust. I hope it came across ok. I though this might lead to one of the more disciplined soldiers noticing and trying to train her a little. Let me know
Tara
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